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दर्द September 27, 2006

Posted by silentEcho in Rhyme junction.

Wrote a poem after a long long time. This one’s inspired from this poem. Best viewed in IE 4 and above OR Opera.
अश्क़ झिलमिलाते हैं मेरे लबों पर,
तिरा अक्स दिखता है अक्स में मेरे।

तू कहाँ ये नहीं पता मुझे पर,
सिरहाने ही रहते है अब ख़्वाब तेरे।

इक पल मे ज़िन्दगी जी लेते हैं अब,
हर पल मरते हैं इंतज़ार में तेरे।

कुछ सुरूर है इस दर्द में ‘गाफ़िल’
अब मदहोश ही रहते हैं होश मेरे।




1. phoenix - September 27, 2006

Nice one. If mine was too much dard, yours is nothing but dard

2. wisemoron - September 28, 2006

Naah, it depends on interpretation. BUt then every poem does. I wanted it to be a normal poem with the sense that it doesn’t matter anymore whether you are far or near. But some lines turned the meaning around.


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